From the writing conference, I learned a couple things that would help me improve my essay. One thing I intend to do is establish the identity of the blogger more specifically. In my first draft of my essay I did not exactly state the identity of the blogger. Whoops! So during round two of writing this research paper I plan to establish this so-called identity of the blogger. During the workshop, I also got help on the identity that I was trying to get across to the readers. I explained throughout the essay that the blogger I’m following is passionate, devoted, and holds an avid interest for movies. Thus, I could classify him as a class-five bounty hunter – or something more suitable – a movie buff-fanatic-fan-boy.
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